Imagine this is you.Describe this scene. Describe
The cold frosty wind whistles between my ears. Frigid cold covers my body. It wraps me in its icy blanket . The wind's blanket slows my breathing. I am peaceful and airy. I am in my mountain house. I smell wet ground. I feel new things and I feel hopeful. Above me there is a white hill which rests like a soft pillow.
Beautiful writing, Christina! You worked hard to make beautiful sentences. Here is where you could get to with this:
ReplyDeleteThe cold frosty wind whistles between my ears. Frigid cold covers my body. It wraps me in its icy blanket . The wind's blanket slows my breathing. I am peaceful and airy. I am in my mountain house. I smell wet ground. I feel new things and I feel hopeful. Above me there is a white hill which rests like a soft pillow.